tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2649836242321604207.post1362696656726615242..comments2024-01-25T02:25:40.120-06:00Comments on Lone Star Meanderings: I'm finished . . . I'm finished . . . doing that happy dance!K.M. Saint Jameshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10497196465431986957noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2649836242321604207.post-1233107394408090322009-10-23T19:47:21.972-05:002009-10-23T19:47:21.972-05:00Congrats, Sandra!!!!!!!
I'm so happy for you g...Congrats, Sandra!!!!!!!<br />I'm so happy for you getting to 'the end' (and I hope your industriousness rubs off on me, even a little :). Have a wonderful weekend!Marilyn Branthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05303846770348840645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2649836242321604207.post-79884039529383563212009-10-21T08:05:12.760-05:002009-10-21T08:05:12.760-05:00Ahhh! I'm SO excited for you. I had no idea ...Ahhh! I'm SO excited for you. I had no idea b/c I wasn't at the meeting. We MUST celebrate-like we need an excuse, right? But this is big. HUGE :)L.A. Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11729129827211991040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2649836242321604207.post-39397452619657316982009-10-20T13:18:08.630-05:002009-10-20T13:18:08.630-05:00Yay! Congrats on finishing :)
I agree w/ Pamela&#...Yay! Congrats on finishing :)<br /><br />I agree w/ Pamela's comments. Now just one of my own :) As a reader, there's just too much in that second sentence in the first paragraph (starts with Unfortunately). I had to read it twice. I know exactly what you're saying, but it wasn't a 'smooth' read if that makes sense.<br /><br />That being said, if I picked this up, I'd definitely want to read more :)Katie Reushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18085461796363818906noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2649836242321604207.post-27785968506181072362009-10-20T02:52:47.201-05:002009-10-20T02:52:47.201-05:00yes I agree about the red headed stranger - but lo...yes I agree about the red headed stranger - but love the Trickle of Lies. And by hte way what are grackles?Flowerpothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14102679179201725732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2649836242321604207.post-10036683373476558402009-10-19T14:55:18.805-05:002009-10-19T14:55:18.805-05:00Good tidbits. Thanks so much.
I really wanted to ...Good tidbits. Thanks so much.<br /><br />I really wanted to post the first blurb to pop out of me head -- sorry, that was a scary visual -- because I'm not in any way attached to it so I'll make any and all necessary changes. I have found that sometimes my first run throughs are better than if I, personally, beat them to death. <br /><br />Ya'll beating them to death is perfectly acceptable.<br /><br />Thanks again, Pam. I'm really excited about the finished version.K.M. Saint Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10497196465431986957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2649836242321604207.post-58123842143023924192009-10-19T11:25:37.254-05:002009-10-19T11:25:37.254-05:00Congrats!!! I thought I heard some shouting from t...Congrats!!! I thought I heard some shouting from that direction Saturday morning. ;-)<br /><br />For the teaser, I'd make a comment in the first line of the second paragraph about the red-headed stranger being a woman, like red-headed bombshell, or something like that. It took me a second to figure out the redhead wasn't the killer from the previous sentence. I'd also change the punctuation to be "...Boston Donavan--burned by his big-city conniving ex-wife--prized two things: honesty and his small town. Now, he's caught..."<br /><br />Trickle of Lies sounds fabulous! I'm in awe of those who can write suspense! Is it contest bound anywhere?<br /><br />Congrats again! M&Ms all around!Pamela Caynehttp://pamwritesromance.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com